I'm wondering what else Rob told you about beekeeping, and the sound of the bees.
I'd love to hear a little something from him that gives me a sense of his relation to their sound or that helps me listen a little deeper into the sound. (Also not sure about using his name since we don't typically use them in the haiku. I'm wondering about starting with "...the sound you're hearing is the sound of my honey bees...")
Christine, I think this does need a little something else from him. It really depends on the tape you have but I don't know if the bees ever sound different than other times or anything like that. It feels like the voice isn't necessarily making me lean into the sound or showing me something different than I would expect from the sound of honeybees. Almost like it was a little too straight forward if that makes sense. Although good job going out there and getting the tape. Hannah
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Christine,
ReplyDeleteI'm wondering what else Rob told you about beekeeping, and the sound of the bees.
I'd love to hear a little something from him that gives me a sense of his relation to their sound or that helps me listen a little deeper into the sound. (Also not sure about using his name since we don't typically use them in the haiku. I'm wondering about starting with "...the sound you're hearing is the sound of my honey bees...")
Any thoughts from the other tape you gathered?
-stephanie
Christine,
ReplyDeleteI think this does need a little something else from him. It really depends on the tape you have but I don't know if the bees ever sound different than other times or anything like that. It feels like the voice isn't necessarily making me lean into the sound or showing me something different than I would expect from the sound of honeybees. Almost like it was a little too straight forward if that makes sense. Although good job going out there and getting the tape.
Hannah