here is another draft. this time i have included the intro and outro music. i toned down some of the abrasive digging sounds.
how do the two pieces of music work together at the end? i tried to leave a small amount of space in between them.
they vaguely end and start with notes that work together.
suggestions?
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Christine,
ReplyDeleteThis sounds great.
( Did decide that the giggle at the end didn't work? Just curious.)
One small thought-- It's usually nice to let the intro music come in for half a second or a full second before the sounds of the haiku enter (so as a listener you don't have to try and process them together at once.)
Other than that, I think we're good on this one.
-stephanie
hi christine, nice job. this is working although it feels like the ending could be stronger. i'm wondering if you could bring 'nat sound up' after she says her last line?: ie. bring the levels of the song and the digging up to full when the dialogue ends, as if to punctuate the end of her talk. (and this is niddly but it seems like the song almost ends early too and if it was possible, i might see what happens if i pull the song over a little (like a second or so, so it ends right before the first note of the theme music.) worth a try anyway. let's see. this one will be nice for the radio!
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